Hi TJ Thank you for sharing your learning this week. I really like the detail in the setting to your narrative. You really created a picture in my head and I could very clearly see where the story was taking place. Well done on your 1st and 3rd person reading work also, I like how you highlighted the clues you used to work out which point of view it was written from. Keep it up! Miss Hudson
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Good job tj!
ReplyDeletefor finishing your work i like your wanted poster
and your last slide it looks really cool have a good day and stay safe
Thanks Lucas, My last slide was my villain mask I created.Stay safe in your bubble and have fun!🤪
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ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your learning this week. I really like the detail in the setting to your narrative. You really created a picture in my head and I could very clearly see where the story was taking place. Well done on your 1st and 3rd person reading work also, I like how you highlighted the clues you used to work out which point of view it was written from.
Keep it up! Miss Hudson
Thank you Miss Hudson.
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