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Thursday, February 25, 2021

Writing/ Model: Cheddar cheese and chocolate cake.

This weeks writing we had to do a poem this is mine


I am crazy about nice juicy comedies .

I am addicted to sports.

I never tire of my Dad’ cooking.

I can consume a whole packet of M&Ms.

I wear nice denim shorts with my favourite top.

I love to sing & play sports.

I love my family.

I also like my friends.

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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2021 at 10:15 AM

    Hi Tj,
    I like your wirting maybe next time you could add some more descriptive words apart from that is was good.

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  2. AnonymousMay 6, 2021 at 1:37 PM

    Hi Telesia-June I really like your writing but I do agree with Kaylynn, Next time you could add a bit more descriptive words but other than that I love it!

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