Hi TJ, I really enjoyed your ending to The Boy Who Only Ate Chocolate story. I liked how you used all the coaches in your story. I also really like your wrapper design of your Island Time chocolate bar. The colours you chose really POP!
Chocolate, chocolate and more chocolate! You're dream subject. Hi TJ. You have some great facts. I didn't know that the first choc bar was made in 1847. Thanks for teaching me something new. You're story ending was a great read. The food combos you mixed with choc were all great suggestions. Your vocab is expanding and it's so good to see. Good stuff TJ, keep it up.
You know me so well Dad. Yes I do LOVE chocolate! I got the idea of my story ending from when you sometimes hide veges in our dinners. You taught me something too.
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Hi TJ, I really enjoyed your ending to The Boy Who Only Ate Chocolate story. I liked how you used all the coaches in your story. I also really like your wrapper design of your Island Time chocolate bar. The colours you chose really POP!
ReplyDeleteThanks Cruze, It was the first time I used TinkerCad and it was tricky but the end result turned out cooler than my sketch of my chocolate design.
DeleteChocolate, chocolate and more chocolate! You're dream subject. Hi TJ. You have some great facts. I didn't know that the first choc bar was made in 1847. Thanks for teaching me something new. You're story ending was a great read. The food combos you mixed with choc were all great suggestions. Your vocab is expanding and it's so good to see. Good stuff TJ, keep it up.
ReplyDeleteYou know me so well Dad. Yes I do LOVE chocolate! I got the idea of my story ending from when you sometimes hide veges in our dinners. You taught me something too.
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